Tuesday, 7 June 2011

Self critique (2)

This isn't a perfect photo, but I like what it nearly manages to do.

three ages

The young woman is too close to the bollard and her face isn't showing, the middle-aged woman isn't clearly defined against the window, the old woman's head ought to be in front of the doorway rather than the pillar, the 'wet floor' sign is awkwardly placed behind the bollard.

But graphically it works quite well. For example the manhole cover lower right breaks the monotony of the paving and subtly balances the shot. So it's another near miss.

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